viernes, 3 de septiembre de 2010

GHOST STORY

below will tell you a ghost story I hope you like

Let's begin. This happened long ago, a boy was living in a city of new york, the boy was 18 years, the life was ordinary, until one day in that city, who created an experiment, that failure, The experiment turned all into zombies, except the boy, he had to decipher because it happened. The boy began to investigate, but only in the daytime, at night it was very dangerous, had terrible monsters, zombies, surviving, ensuring your home, set traps, got the best weapons, little by little began to investigate the laboratory until they found him, but had a small problem, the lab was underground, dark, There were the most terrible monsters of the city, the boy felt it was his duty to access the lab to save the cure of such terrible event, so I take all their weapons and entered.
He began to walk slowly and afraid, monsters came from all sides, until I get to the main room, where he was the cure, but there was a small problem, the zombie was the strongest of all, began to fight against, bullets were completed, no longer had weapons and they fought, the boy won, had to take the cure and injected, because he was injured, the boy was saved and saved the city
 
 
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1 comentario:

  1. "a boy was living in a city of new york" = El niño (chavo) estaba viviendo ""en una ciudad de nueva york"", aguas, es ""en la ciudad de Nueva York""


    "the life was ordinary" = La vida era ordinaria, pregunta: ¿Dé quien es la vida? ¿del chavo?

    "who created an experiment" = Quien creo un experimento, ojo, no estas haciendo una pregunta, supongo que querías decir Alguien, y alguien se dice Someone

    Por cierto tal vez te sea útil este link para cuando tengas que usar algún diccionario

    wordreference.org

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